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교정전
Subject: Server Restart Inform
Dear Colleagues,
We will restart our mail server from 17:15 to 18:00 today because the backup tape equipment has
some problems. I'm afraid that we will restart the server many times.
Sorry for the inconvenience to you. If you have any questions, please call 588.
Best regards,
Jenny
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교정후
Subject: Server Restart Notice
Dear Colleagues,
We have discovered that the backup tape equipment for our mail server has some problems.
For this reason, we will restart the server beginning at 17:15 today. We expect the server to be
available again after 18:00.
These repairs to the server will make your Internet and email connections more reliable in the
future.
We apologize for the inconvenience. If you have any questions or concerns, please feel free to
call me on extension 588.
Thank you for your patience and understanding.
Best regards,
Jenny
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